You bring your manuscript. I read it with you, live, telling you my real-time experience as a reader — the moment I get confused, the line that pulls me out, the place where I stop feeling. Then we talk. You push back. I push back. We find the truth underneath both our positions until something lands. You leave with clarity. Not just a list of changes but a deeper understanding of your own work.

What to bring: Your current manuscript or part of it, and any specific questions about what isn't landing.